hazy sky echoes
songs of our favorite haunt
silent love saunters
remnants evoke sighing sounds
muffled in the hues of time.
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hushed by static time
tea cups whisper our secrets
a long list of vows
only clouds could understand
the fury of our passion.
© Balroop Singh
Thanks to Sadje for the inspirational image #Whatdoyousee – 305
Thanks to Willow and Colleen for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry. The challenge this week is to imagine a color, smell, sound, or image that triggers a memory.
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Emotional Shadows 
This is beautiful for both prompts Balroop 💜💜💜
Thank you Willow. Memories are like that!
Yes indeed they are 💜💜
Perfect poems for the prompt. xo
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Darlene.
♥️
To hold the love ethereal….
Yes! That’s exactly my thought! Thanks Violet.
Absolutely beautiful!
Thank you Jan.
engaging and touches the heart of my heart that has been touched by love
Thank you so much for your lovely words, Annette.
So very beautiful Balroop !
Thank you Maggie.
My pleasure Balroop.
Beautiful Balroop. I loved the line about clouds 🥰
Thank you Deb.
Perfect poems for both prompts, Balroop! I especially love the second tanka! ❤
Thank you Miriam. I am delighted to hear that.
A beautiful poem for both the challenges Balroop. Love your poem. Thanks for joining in.
Thank you Sadje. Your choice of images is always evocative.
Thank you dear friend. Since I myself write for many challenges, I do try to find images that inspire more that the obvious.
Beautiful panorama and poem Balroop 😊🙏😊
Thanks Kamal.
Balroop, love it all but that second tanka is just sublime 🙌💞
Thank you for your lovely feedback, Ange. I am glad both the tanka have been liked by different poets.
It is very special 💞
Such lovely Tanka poems… the first one is amazing! “…sighing sounds/ muffled in the hues of time.” 💕
Thank you Nicole.
Both are sublime for the image, Balroop…”tea cups whisper our secrets” Just lovely. 💕
I am glad you’ve picked the soul of this tanka, Lauren. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. 🤗
You’re so welcome, Balroop. 🌷
Welcome Balroop 😊
Both are beautiful, Balroop!
Thank you Chris.
memories like these are preserved intact. So lovely. Thanks so much.
Love and memories forever intertwined! Beautiful writing, Balroop. 💜
Thank you Colleen.
Beautiful writing on both!
Thank you.
I particularly love the last two lines!
I am delighted to hear that. Thank you Dawn.