Enigmatic Beauty
She knows she is spring
A pristine beauty, softer than breeze
With velvety tresses like midnight –
A dame with a guiding grace.
Those eyes hold the whole world;
A little kohl in them could entice
A million hearts;
She knows she could pull a thousand strings.
Moments bow before her;
She has no ceilings to shatter.
Sky is not the limit for her
Stormy skies don’t deter her.
Soaring on the birds of hope
She looks beyond the horizon;
Emotions can never shackle her
She follows the path of positive power.
Some alleys may be obscure
Thorny monsters could be scheming
To prick, to mentor, to intimidate.
Self-belief is her armor.
A whirlwind of serenity
She thrives on the winds of change.
Wilderness walks with her
Silent strength echoes in her dreams.
You can never understand this layered beauty
Even if you delve into her enigmatic eyes.
© Balroop Singh
All Rights Reserved.
Thanks to Sadje for an inspirational photo prompt – WDYS #360.
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“Wilderness walks with herSilent strength echoes in her dreams.” – what a Fearless girl and don’t we all wish to feel like that, every now and again?
A gorgeous poetry book, Balroop! ☆☆☆☆☆
Aww… Thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement, Pat. And many thanks for a wonderful review of my book. 🤗🤗
What a very vivid piece, Balroop! 👍
Thanks Aptivi.
You’re most welcome Balroop. ☺️
Wow! Love this beautiful ode to this beautiful lady. You’ve excelled Balroop, my friend. Thanks for joining in
Thank you for a lovely feedback, Sadje. I am delighted to hear that. Thanks for the inspiration. ❤️
You’re most welcome
What a wonderful ode! I really enjoyed, Balroop.
Thank you, Chris.
So beautiful! “Moments bow before her…”
Thank you, Jan.
You are most welcome!
Oh my, this is simply delightful!
Thank you so much, Keith.
Striking, beautiful lines Balroop.
Loved your response 👏👏
Thank you Maggie.
You really captured this image, Balroop:)
Thank you Denise.
What an empowering, exquisite ode! Lines like ‘self-belief is her armor’ and ‘wilderness walks with her’ are so hauntingly beautiful and evocative. I completely agree with Author Jan Sikes about the magic of ‘Moments bow before her…’, and like Patricia Furstenberg highlighted, that quiet, fearless strength is something we all aspire to hold. Beautifully written, Balroop!
Thank you for sharing your lovely words. What inspires my muse is an honest feedback and I like your choice of words. 🥰
That genuine connection is what makes reading and sharing poetry so special! So glad you liked my reflection ☺️☺️
gorgeous write in the photo dear Balroop. Tremendous. I like this line especially: Moments bow before her;
She has no ceilings to shatter.
Sky is not the limit for her
Stormy skies don’t deter her.
I also wrote to this prompt. Publishing later tonight. Bless you always. Xoxo beautiful writing.
Thank you so much Selma for your kind words of encouragement, much appreciated. 🤗
A basket of beautiful words and story to fit the image perfectly. 🥰
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Deb. 🤗
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I am almost certain that she would hug you for this
Hopefully! 😊
exquisitely expressed, Balroop g…🤍
I am delighted to hear that.
What a beautiful poem, Balroop!
Thank you Dawn.
I love where the picture took you, Balroop
Thank you, Keith.
Hello, Balroop! I’m the girl in the photograph. You’ve woven such beautiful words into an extraordinary ode, and I’m truly touched by the way you saw so much poetry in this image. Thank you for giving it such a lovely life through your words. I wish you endless inspiration, wonderful heights to reach, and many more beautiful poems to share with the world. Sending you the warmest hug!
Hi Diana, thank you so much for sharing your lovely thoughts. I am delighted to hear that you liked my poem so much. Many thanks for your wishes, much appreciated.