#TankaTuesday #Dodoitsu

A glacier in my heart,
icy blood, numb arteries
long shadows overwhelm me –
a dreary desert.

***

Trudging through the sands of time,
my feet hold the coarse remnants
a ray of sunshine might help
frozen emotions.

***

Life was a lullaby once
when your gentle hands held me,
when you were my warm blanket –
my beacon of glow.
© Balroop Singh 

Thanks to Robbie and Colleen for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry. The challenge this week is to choose any form of syllabic poem and use at least one metaphor in the poem. I chose to write a string of Dodoitsu.

A Dodoitsu is a Japanese form of poetry that is sometimes performed as a folk song. It has 26 syllables: 7 in the first, second and third lines, and 5 in the last line.(7/7/7/5). No rhyming. No title.

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#PhotoPrompt #Senryu #WDYS

Image credit; Y S @ Unsplash

Crossroads

A magical glow
what a surreal sunrise!
Joshua trees gleam.

Morning rays beckon
an unknown chill confines me
icy fingers clench.

Unseen clouds cloak me
a rocky terrain restricts
memories warm up.

Through the yellow light
your hands reach out to hold me
A mystical sight!
© Balroop Singh

Thanks to Sadje for the inspiration — Whatdoyousee #298

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#TankaTuesday – Shadorma

Alma Thomas, Wind and Crepe Myrtle Concerto, 1973, acrylic on canvas, Smithsonian American Art Museum

Entwined

Open arms,
inhale the fragrance
of petals,
soft shower
of romance that soaks our souls
in the bliss of thrill.

Holding hands, 
feel the ecstasy,
the passion, 
the moment
of wrapping the pink softness
of unexplored path.

Do we need
any assurance,
any oath?
our souls know
how they’re knotted together
in the maze of pink.
© Balroop Singh

Thanks to Melissa and Colleen for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry. This week’s challenge is to write a Shadorma series (two or three, I’ll let you pick) using the paintings in this post. You may use one painting to inspire all your syllabic poetry, or perhaps you’d like to use several. Look at the paintings, their colors, and titles, and see where they take you.

A Shadorma consists of a six-line stanza (or sestet). Each stanza is written as 3-5-3-3-7-5 for a total of 26 syllables with no set rhyme scheme. When writing a Shadorma, concentrate on a specific subject. Add a title. 

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#TankaTuesday – Butterfly Cinquain

Behold…

The grass
drenched with dew
waits for the orange glow 
daisies toss their heads with dahlias
bees drink
the potion of spring with fervor
I join the children who
catch butterflies
with zing.

***

Betrayal

Fiery
embers smolder
within my pristine heart,
desecrated by Trojan horse.
ash swarms,
asphyxiating my larynx.
shadows crawl around me.
shrouded in fog,
I drop.

© Balroop Singh

Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry. This week’s challenge is to experiment with synesthesia. Choose a syllabic form of your choice, and use at least two examples of synesthesia in your poem. (If two examples are too much, make sure you have at least one example of synesthesia in your poem).

I’ve written two Butterfly Cinquains. The Butterfly Cinquain is an unrhymed, nine-line syllabic titled poem with the pattern: 2-4-6-8-2-8-6-4-2.

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#BookReviews – Five Stars for Each One

Meadowlark Songs is a fascinating account of Kidney’s motherline legacy – a story of seven generations through challenging times. Many memorable and poignant moments have been captured by her with poise. It is a fabulous homage to the women whose resilience shines through this poetic tribute, made exquisite by beautiful family pictures.

Written in free verse and a straightforward style, this book gives a peek into the history, high mortality rate, and lifestyles of the people. My heart goes out to Leora, who was not allowed to go to high school, but she resolved that her own daughters would become high school graduates.

‘Song of My Heart’ reiterates how Kidney has learned profound lessons of “adaptability and tenacity” from her ancestors. It is a marvel how she has collected so many stories and anecdotes about them! It is a heart-warming and staggering collection.

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Murray introduced me to the ‘Dawn of Humanity’ with her trilogy and kept relating the amazing stories of prehistoric tribes through her second trilogy – ‘Crossroads.’ ‘Endangered Species’ continues her quest to reveal more about the evolution of man. Set in the European region of 75,000 years ago, her characters have learned to speak and cook their meat, they seem to have developed better weapons and medical skills. However, even in this era, the main focus of the people is hunting for food and safety.

It is interesting to note that dreams and visions play an important role in guiding Shanadar who considers himself a “dreamer” but is chosen by Xhosa to rescue Yu’ung and guide her to her tribe’s new home. Yu’ung is a trained hunter, exudes confidence, understands the environment better than men but realizes how different were the fragile spears, which were thrown from a distance by the Tall Ones to assault their prey. She learns healing techniques from Kriina and has the reputation of being “unafraid to be unique.” She has been brilliantly crafted. 

This well-researched and fascinating book reveals the struggles of Neanderthals and the Tall Ones. It also highlights the determination, courage and the prowess of early humans, eager to learn more. If you like prehistoric fiction, you’ll find it interesting.

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Voodoo or Destiny is a thought-provoking tale of heartbreak and hurt. Claire’s emotional turmoil will touch your heart. Sikes skillfully brings out the anger and pain of betrayal. Voodoo therapy suggested by her friend sounds like a fun activity until she hears the unbelievable!

A cute short story, with two well-crafted characters and a dash of fantasy may seem simple but it explores profound aspects of the human psyche and the impact of life-changing decisions. An enjoyable read. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

This short story comments on the relationship of two brothers and how selfish people take their siblings for granted. The expectations of Rowdy and his mother shocked me but Sikes refrains from passing judgment. In an objective manner, she tells you the story of Quentin and Rowdy and keeps it open for her reader’s critique.

True to her short story style, Sikes keeps her narrative succinct and focuses on character development. Quentin emerges to be a winner despite all that he has to bear.  A page-turner, this story kept me guessing until the court’s decision. It is an engaging and heart-wrenching tale.

Thank you, dear readers. Happy reading. More reviews are coming soon.

Thank you for reading my poetry.
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