Spiritual Vibes
I
walked
with my muse
last night, drowsy
but awake, eager
to see where she takes me.
She took me into the land
full of ethereal beauty,
brimming with spiritual silence –
an offer to look within, to forgive.
The silence percolated within me.
A gossamer veil caressed my face
my spirit soared to touch the vibes
emitted by pagoda.
Twenty steps I climbed,
each one cleansed my heart
divine power
pulled me in.
A new
dawn.
© Balroop Singh
Thanks to Sadje for the inspiration #Whatdoyousee – 326
Thanks to Colleen and Yvette for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry. The challenge this week is to “focus on the idea of cleansing. You can choose to go with purification or atonement, if you’d like. Find a syllabic poetry form that works for you, and let your inspiration flow.”
I have written a double Etheree.
An Etheree is a type of poem which consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. So it is called a double Etheree.
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Brava! Chances taken for healing’s freedom.
Thank you for your kind words, Annette.
Beautiful, Balroop. When I lived in Japan, I climbed steps such as these to reach the “spiritual silence.” ❤️
If an image can evoke poetry, the real place must be mesmerizing! Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Gwen.
Beautiful Balroop.
Thank you!
A very beautiful poem Balroop. You’ve created a very spiritual poem. Thanks for joining in.
All credit goes to you and your image selection, Sadje. Thank you for your lovely words.
Thank you so much dear friend
This is so beautiful and inspirational, Balroop! Lovely! 💞
Thank you so much Lauren.
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A beautiful double etheree. Love the journey is takes us on, to a new dawn.
Thank you for coming over to Emotional Shadows, much appreciated. Welcome! I am glad you like my poetry.
oh Balroop. I feel cleansed just reading this. Delightful. Thanks so much.
Thank you Selma, you are so generous with your words. 🤗
Serene and peaceful poem Balroop 💓
Thank you Kamal. 🤗
A beautiful poem Balroop. I appreciate how you connected the spiritual atmosphere of the site with your own spiritual journey. Inspiring!
I like to fly with my imagination. Thank you for your lovely words of encouragement, Marie. 🤗
What a picture perfect verse!
Thank you so much for your feedback, Violet.
This poem not only empowers but inspires. Just beautiful, Balroop!
Thank you Jan.
How lovely and inspiring, Balroop!
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, Eugi.
You’re welcome, Balroop.
Always welcome Balroop 💓
This is such a refreshing burst of positive energy that instantly lifts the vibe.
♥️ Balroop, what a lovely piece of meditative poetry. It captures that ‘liminal space’ – the bridge between wakefulness and sleep, where the mind is most open to spiritual imagery🙌
Thank you for such an insightful feedback, Ange, much appreciated. 🥰
You are most welcome 💞
Such a picture-perfect verse! It captivated me completely—I struggled to move on from it
Thank you K. I am delighted to hear that.
Balroop, there is such beauty and serenity in this poem, my soul feels uplifted upon reading your words. My son recently returned from travelling around Japan and the visit to the temples there had a profound effect on him.
Thank you for sharing the effects of a visit to such serene places, Annika. I‘be tried to capture the same in my own humble way. I am glad my words are reaching out to touch your soul. 🙏
That is lovely, Balroop. I hope your latest poetry book is doing well!
Thank you Jacqui. Wishing you great success with your new release.
Beautiful poem, Balroop! Thanks for participating this week!
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Thank you Yvette. I really liked your challenge.😊
Balroop, this is a beautiful poem. I could see the steps we must climb to find that cleansing space where we are all one. Excellent writing! 💜
Thank you so much for sharing such a spiritual thought, Colleen. 🥰🤗
You’re most welcome, Balroop.
So beautiful!
Thank you, Dawn.