#Summer 24 Seasons… Challenge #Etheree

Summer Break

Cool 
breezy
summer break, 
sojourns we loved
to the foothills of
splendid Himalayas
that breathe a leisurely mood.
just sit and gaze at the snowcaps
of majestic mountains, far away
from the din of cities and scalding heat.

Memorable moments of renewal 
of love inadvertently buried
in the race of reaching the crest.
time to forget all the grudges
soak in blissful nature,
feel the summer vibes, 
hear the whisper
of pine trees
blend with 
clouds.
© Balroop Singh

Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry. I chose to write a double Etheree.

Kigo words: summer mood

Inspired from the prompt: “There’s something about the summer that makes me moody…”

An Etheree is a type of poem which consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. So it is called a double Etheree.

Image from Pixaby.

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Winter Whispers

Winter in the Country, c. 1859 by George Henry Durrie, Artist from the National Gallery of Art

Winter Whispers

Dare I step out on this winter morning when all I want is to close all the doors on the soft glow of morning that is offering hope, a hope I want to reject, a hope that seems meaningless at this hour? An unknown force pulled me out of the grieving grave, whispering in my ear – I am with you; look within; my love will forever guide you out of this darkness. I stumbled out.

snowy path ahead
new beginnings beckoning
despite the cold clouds

Stony eyed, I turn back and look at the cottage that was full of life once. Withering winds of wet winter could never deter our pleasure of enjoying long walks – togetherness that was the envy of many.

winter moon beaming
unaware of dismal songs
reverberating 

© Balroop Singh

Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry.

The challenge this week is: you choose the form, and you choose the past season, and the winter kigo words or use the piece of art above, as an inspiration. You must use at least one kigo word in your poem. Remember, if you write a haibun or a haiku, the kigo word is required in the haiku.

Kigo word used:  new beginnings, cold clouds, winter moon.

Dark #Winter

Pixaby image

Dark, windy winter
hisses like venomous viper
cold light casts shadows 

***

cold clouds dominate
pine needles flutter fiercely 
birds snuggle and hide

***

snowdrops hang on trees
fog envelops the valley
darkness draws nearer

***

sun has been eclipsed
Mother Nature shares sadness
mist hovers mutely
© Balroop Singh

Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry.

Kigo words that I chose for this challenge: cold light, cold clouds, snowdrops.

Lily Love #chōka

Photo credit: Terri Webster Schrandt,

love breeze beguiled us
when we planted white lilies –
our precious flowers
in our glorious garden.
In gratitude, some
butterflies twirl, eager to 
plant vibrant kisses 
on pristine petals of love
a true commemoration 

***

that our love was both – 
tenuous and fiercely wild
ruins are beautiful! 
who said spring is eternal?
shifting sands murmur
shadows of night susurrate
water flows at will
all carry the same message:
love is just like white lilies

***

your lilies withered
when you didn’t nurture them 
the door was open
I just had to walk through it
into the wide world
rooted to icy threshold,
 in quagmire of fears,
I shudder at skepticism
that is pulling me backwards.

***
© Balroop Singh

Thanks to Colleen and Terri for the inspiration to create syllabic poetry. This week I chose to write a nine-line chōka, which has 5-7-5-7-5-7-5-7-7 syllables.

Thank you.

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#BookReviews – Five #Stars for each one

It’s been a while since I shared the reviews of the books I’ve read. Here are some of my favorites, each one got glittering five stars from me.

Redemption: A fabulous blend of mystery, suspense and emotions

Redemption is an action-packed story of a family that falls apart due to the secret activities of Eric who is murdered in his own home. His wife ends up in a hospital and their daughter Lisa, along with her brother Trace, tries to figure out the maze, which entangles them with each effort, as they try to solve the mystery of their father’s murder. In this fast-paced story, suspense plays a significant role, as it is difficult to decide who is trustworthy.

There is a divine touch that unfolds through the intuitive ability of Lisa. Plano has created a wonderful trio – Lisa, Trace and his friend Ryan. Together, they traverse the dangerous lanes of investigation and keep you at the edge of your chair. Many secrets tumble out of the closet that are shocking for Trace. The growth of characters is noteworthy. A fabulous blend of mystery, suspense and emotions, the way emotional upheavals are thrown in to give a realistic view of life in the midst of crisis, is remarkable.  If you like thrillers with a warm touch, you would like this book.

Return to Silverhills: Packed with action and adventure

Return to Silverhills by Sandra Cox captures your heart the moment it starts and holds it till the last page. A fast-paced story of Lisa, a withdrawn girl who had suffered at the hands of Comancheros, is told with vivacity. She was rescued by Brandon and is wary of men but when she gets an opportunity to do her share, she offers to accompany Brandon’s brother Jeff to help the cook on a cattle drive.  

Challenges await in the form of blizzards, quicksand, gunshots, and many more adventures. Despite continuous action and perils lurking at each step, this is a heartwarming story of care, concern and love. The grandfatherly concern of Cookie for the group, the passion that goes into taking care of Lisa and the names like Arabella, Honey, Hope, Lucky give a sensitive touch to the narrative.  

Cox’s incisive style of writing, without any superfluous details or distractions makes her books so likable and this one is no exception. The way she handles Jeff’s feelings for Lisa is remarkable. If you like a western story with a touch of tenderness, you will love this book.

Lion Scream: A visual and poetic delight

Lion Scream is a visual and poetic delight but more than that it holds a wealth of information about amazing creatures of southern Africa in a succinct manner. Cheadle shares her incredible personal experiences with the wild animals and her video footage links add another dimension to this book. Her love for wild life shines through her poems, most of which are written in the form of ‘Double Ennead.’ I appreciate her sensitive approach toward the fauna.

As the title of the book symbolizes –  human beings need to hear the scream because the impact of poaching, killing and encroaching upon the natural habitat of wild animals has produced disastrous consequences. The first poem ‘Lion Scream’ sums up the plight of wildlife – “there is no jungle, only acres of smooth stumps…”

‘Rhino Dilemma’ clearly demonstrates the savagery and greed of man.

The book has very aptly been dedicated to “everyone who relies on Earth for survival.” It concludes with an insightful short story ‘Nutcracker,’ emphasizing the effect of man’s apathetic attitude toward his environment.

Grow Damn it!: A perfect blend of emotions and humor

 ‘Grow Damn it!’ is a brilliant potion, in which Oreglia blends snippets of her life – moments of joy and despondency, in equal measure. When she expresses emotions, she takes you into the depths of an ocean where breathing becomes an excruciating effort but when she talks about the lighter moments of life, she takes you beyond the clouds and you merge into their folds with perfect harmony, as if you were a part of the story being told. Such is the magic of her style of writing – informal yet effective. Warmth percolates from her words that reaches your heart effortlessly. Her bonding with the Magnolia tree, her relationship with her mother, sister and grandchildren speaks volumes about her magnanimous heart.  Her reflections exude wisdom and wit. I could relate to many of her experiences.

I thought ‘True Grit’ is my favorite chapter but then I read ‘Midlife, Nettles’ and found it hilarious. No! I told myself – ‘Middle-Aged Penance’ is better but wait, read ‘Can I Tell You…’ and then decide! Some of her expressions are classic! Just consider this one:

“The ants are staying for dinner. Buy some bait.” (You have to read this book to know the “ants.”)

“The wines are breathing much better than I am.”

“My gratitude bubbles over as if my soul were a flute of fine champagne.”

“There are things death cannot touch.” – how profound!

Oreglia also shares some beautiful pictures of her family.

I have not read a more meaningful memoir that could speak to me on an emotional level. Never have I been so drawn by a book! It beckoned me even when I was watching my favorite show. Highly recommended.

Thank you.

Balroop Singh.

If you like poetry: click here to hear Magical Whispers

Or hang out with  Hues Of Hope