When We Walked on the Railroad
What lay beyond was alluring
So we walked on the railroad track
Despite the warnings:
Mountains on the left,
River on the right,
A speeding train could knock us off!
But what lay beyond was irresistible.
Nothing deterred us
Uneven surfaces, narrow shoulder,
Only trees to hang on
if a hooting train comes
On the track we walked on.
We met many people
As adventurous as us,
Some with little children
on their shoulders,
Curious to see the beauty
of Mossbrae Falls,
Wondering
Why is there no better approach?
“Look out for the train -”
A refrain reverberated.
After a trek of forty five minutes
A breezy, soft spray of water
greeted us.
We saw the most stunning falls,
So different, falling like silvery ribbons.
Here, the river is shallow
Serenity seesaws with its rhythmic tone.
Mesmerized by
the symphony of surroundings
Enthralled by
the message of silent breeze
We embraced the magic of moments.
No train passed by
But wait, it did come minutes later
With its ear-shattering hooter
As we were walking toward the car parking.
Listed as the top attraction of Dunsmuir,
The access to Mossbrae Falls is officially closed now
Until a safe, legal trail is created.
© Balroop Singh
Thanks to Sadje for stirring memorable moments through the above image #Whatdoyousee – 313.
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I felt as though I were there!
Wow! I am glad you could feel the experience. Thank you Annette.
Thank you so much Balroop for introducing us to this amazing falls. I loved the suspense created be your verses and the happy and delightful ending. Thanks for joining in.
My pleasure, Sadje. The moment I saw this prompt, this lovely memory cropped up to warm my heart. Despite the warning of the locals not to undertake this risky adventure, I was determined to see the falls and it was worth walking on the rail track. 😀
You’re most welcome. Thanks for the intro to this beautiful place.
What an incredible adventure! You took me along with you, Balroop. Fantastic!
I am delighted to hear that, Jan.
Beautiful moment and adventure, Balroop!
Such moments make wonderful memories. Thank you for swinging by, Denise.
I agree they do!
Wonderfully descriptive.
Thank you.
Wonderful Balroop!
I felt like I was there too 🤗
I am glad my words took you there, Maggie. Thank you for your lovely company.
My pleasure always Balroop, and thank you for your words 🤗
Beautiful photo of you and the journey described in your poem is captivating. Sounds well worth the trek. ✨
Thank you for stopping by to share your thoughts, Michele.
You’re very welcome. Take care. 💝
This journey is equal parts adventure, poetry, and reflection. The imagery of “silvery ribbons” and the “message of silent breeze” is simply stunning.👏🏻🙏🏻
Thank you for sharing your kind words.
👍🏻🙂🙏🏻
Such a nice poem Balroop taking us on the adventure with you! It must have been an incredible one. We can feel it, the danger around and the happiness when finding this amazing spot in nature.
Thank you Marie, I am glad you could feel the emotions that i’ve shared through this poem. 🤗
That line “what lay beyond was irresistible” really captures the poem’s adventurous spirit, Balroop.
Much love,
David
Thank you David.
You’re very welcome! ❤
BTW, totally unrelated, but if you'd ever like to write a rengay with me, I would be honored!
Much love,
David
Sure!
Hooray!
Could you please shoot me an email at:
DVDBGMLNY at GMAIL dot COM
Thanks for taking us on this beautiful walk, Balroop. Your imagery is so vivid; I felt like I was walking beside you, enjoying the scenery of the stunning falls. 💞
Wow! I am delighted to hear that. Thank you Lauren.
What a perfect picture of you on the railroad tracks.
Thank you Jacqui.
Fabulous poem and the falls are so beautiful Balroop
You made me want to walk there, Balroop. Your imagery is so peaceful and full of wonder. Good idea for them to make a safer trail. ❤
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, Diana. 🤗
Wow… wonderful, Balroop!
Thank you Chris 🧡