#Etheree #TankaTuesday #PoetryChallenge

The Fool

Image courtesy: Colleen’s TankaTuesday

Fools
think they
can conquer
even the minds.
Blowing their trumpet,
they plan to take big strides,
oblivious of people
who hold the absolute power.
Their selfish thoughts lead them to their doom.
Annals of history are before you.

Our worries can never change the future
Wait and hope is the best conviction
Nobody owns the place he claims
All perish in the hourglass
and go empty handed.
Fools fail to foresee
those divine plans.
Arrogance
mentors
them.
© Balroop Singh

Thanks to Colleen and Willow for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry. The challenge this week is to focus on the theme, which is the Fool card from the Tarot. Choose an image and use the art on the card(s) to inspire your poetic reading of the fool card. You can use any syllabic form you’d like.

I have written a double Etheree.

An Etheree is a type of poem which consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. So it is called a double Etheree.

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37 thoughts on “#Etheree #TankaTuesday #PoetryChallenge

  1. A powerful poem, Balroop. I think it captures a hard decision that many face these days, to stand up and resist or to sit back and trust. The best path may be somewhere in between and that balance is hard to find. That’s my interpretation anyway. Thanks for the thought-provoking poem. Hugs ❤

    1. I believe when we can’t do anything, it’s better to sit back and wait for the right opportunity. Anger and angst don’t serve any purpose. Thank you for sharing your thoughts dear friend. 🤗

  2. Very well done 🙂 I love etherees, and really like the way you use the double one 🙂

  3. Powerful Balroop. That is my hope the fools go down and at some point I will know my part in it.

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