If You Were Here…
A gentle hug of Mother Nature
Pulls me out.
In connivance with the wind,
She showers pink petals
To cheer me up.
Still tied to shadows,
I glance at the beauty, the blossoms
And think…
If you were here
We would’ve walked under this pink canopy.
Placid water reflects my image
And you wave at me
Your endearing smile says:
“Your presence enhances the beauty.”
For a moment, your voice echoes
And then your face fades,
Jolting my heart with a renewed shudder
Cherry trees catch the signal,
Spread some more petals around me.
Draping your memories, I walk alone.
© Balroop Singh
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Such longing. Once lived, forever survived in memory. xo
So true! Loved ones always live within our hearts. Thank you for sharing your thoughts Violet.
This is a beautifully written poem Balroop. The poignancy of your words is very touching. Thanks for joining in.
Thank you Sadje. I’ve written a lot of nature poetry but this is the first one which doesn’t admire the beauty.
You’re very welcome. Thanks for participating
My pleasure.
Balroop, this is a beautiful, tender piece. The imagery of the pink canopy and the longing for a loved one is so moving.
Much love,
David
Thank you for your kind words David. This longing will never ease in this life.
That’s beautiful.
Thank you.
Such a lovely image of you under the pink petals. And the ‘visit’ from your dearest husband is such a treasure, Balroop.
Thank you Lisa, I try to find him everywhere.
I feel the longing in these words, Balroop. Beautifully expressed.
Thank you Jan.
A pretty image and I felt longing weaved into your beautiful words, Balroop.
Thank you Denise.
Amazing! 🧡🩷
Thank you Shreya.
You’re welcome.
This one touched my heart, Balroop. I love the way nature recognizes and honors your sorrow while offering gentle solace. Such a beautiful poem. Hugs.
Thank you dear friend, I try to find solace in each element of Mother Nature, as if she understands me. 🤗🥰
She does,
I beg to differ… but you never walk alone, as he is always with you. Physically? No. But he is everywhere you are. I promise! ❤
Aww…Thank you so much Annette. That brought tears to my eyes.
This tugged at my heartstrings Balroop.
It is so very beautiful!
Thank you Maggie.
My pleasure Balroop.
Excellent
Thank you.
You are welcome 🤩🤩
I felt your words. Listen to Annette, they are with us. ❤
I know Deb but one corner of the heart continues to bleed.
I’m afraid that corner will always be raw. We know this ❤
🤗 Only a few understand this. Thank you Deb.
Balroop, there is one things about grief. It’s not something we can explain, only those of us who wear the shoes can understand. A privelge nobody should ever want to endure. ❤
I agree.
Wonderful! Thank you Balroop.
Thank you Cindy.
Such a lovely poem 🫶
Thank you Mich.
Heartfelt poem, Balroop! Sending hugs your way…
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Thank you Yvette 🤗
I love the second verse, Balroop, and the entire poem touched my heart. Hugs, my friend ❤️
Thank you Lauren. 🤗
This is a beautifully evocative poem, Balroop. The final verse is powerful, and hits in the heartstrings.
Thank you so much for coming over to read this poem and share your thoughts, Nicole.
Beautiful 💐
Thank you Val.
Excellent poem and the scenery is apt with your poem Balroop 😊
Thank you Kamal.
You are always welcome dear Balroop 😊🙏😊
Beautiful poetry and photo.
Thank you Dawn.