#TankaTuesday 24 Seasons… #Poetry Challenge

Dew Delight?

Dew doesn’t delight me now. Morning walks sound lusterless without you, yet I plod on the old, preferred path, knowing there can be no new beginnings. Cloudy skies, autumn hues and vermilion sunsets may brighten my day for a moment, but I live in the shadows. White drapes dance around me every morning. They fail to stir a comatose mourner.

Mourning never ends
change in seasons reinforce 
the grim reminder:
darkening days is your fate
loneliness – your only friend.
© Balroop Singh

Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry. The challenge this week is to write Tanka Prose. My kigo words have been highlighted.

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46 thoughts on “#TankaTuesday 24 Seasons… #Poetry Challenge

  1. Balroop, this is a poignant poem. I like how your words allow the reader to feel the pangs of your mourning. I like the connection to dew, and how it doesn’t affect you the same way now. VERY moving. I’m sending you love. ❤️

  2. So deep the pain here my heart goes out to you.
    Grief goes on forever but it should soften with time. We never forget we just carry out loved ones in our hearts 💜

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