
Dew Delight?
Dew doesn’t delight me now. Morning walks sound lusterless without you, yet I plod on the old, preferred path, knowing there can be no new beginnings. Cloudy skies, autumn hues and vermilion sunsets may brighten my day for a moment, but I live in the shadows. White drapes dance around me every morning. They fail to stir a comatose mourner.
Mourning never ends
change in seasons reinforce
the grim reminder:
darkening days is your fate
loneliness – your only friend.
© Balroop Singh
Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry. The challenge this week is to write Tanka Prose. My kigo words have been highlighted.
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I appreciate you continuing to share your sessions of life, Balroop! Take care. 💕
Thanks Miriam.
Hugs to your heart, Balroop! xxx
Thank you Annette 🤗
A sad poem, as it speaks your heart.. Sending love Balroop, and may time heal, and lighten those shadows. ❤ xx
Thank you Sue for your wishes and kind words. 🥰
Always a pleasure xx
Hugs from me to you. ❤
Thank you Deb 🤗
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deeply touching, Balroop G 🤍
A very poignant poem.
Thank you Sadje.
You’re most welcome
Balroop, this is a poignant poem. I like how your words allow the reader to feel the pangs of your mourning. I like the connection to dew, and how it doesn’t affect you the same way now. VERY moving. I’m sending you love. ❤️
Thank you so much Colleen for your love and kindness. I’m glad that my words are reaching the hearts of the readers. 🤗
We feel your pain, my dear friend. ❤️🩹
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You are so right about how the mourning never ends, it just morphs into different things as time passes. This is a lovely poem. So expressive!
Thank you Jan, for understanding the emotions of this poem. 🤗
A beautiful and so mournful poem, Balroop. I’m honored that you’re sharing your deepest feelings with your readers.
I’m so sad. I don’t know how different I’ll be when it happens to me. Be well dear Balroop. Sending hugs.
Thank you for your kind words, dear friend. 🤗
HI Balroop, a very poignant and sad poem. Hugs.
Thank you Robbie 🤗
Beautifully captured, Balroop. Tender but heartbreaking truths. 💙
Thank you Gwen. 🤗
A sad poem Balroop. Sending you lots of love and may you heal with time. Take care 💘💘
Thank you Kamal. 🤗
Welcome dear Balroop 🤗
This poem is so powerful, Balroop! Sending you hugs and love! And congratulations on your new book. The title alone pulls at the heartstrings.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you for your kind words and good wishes, Yvette.
Balroop, it’s understandable the cooler weather will bring sorrowful reminders. {{{HUGS}}}
Thank you for sharing your thoughts Lisa. 🤗
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so sad and deeply poignant. I hope things get better ✍🏾❤️🩹
Thank you Jude.
So deep the pain here my heart goes out to you.
Grief goes on forever but it should soften with time. We never forget we just carry out loved ones in our hearts 💜
So true! Thank you for sharing your words of wisdom, dear Willow. 🤗
Sending hugs 💜💜💜
Balroop – this is so very touching – I really feel the emotion behind the piece deeply, friend…. I’m sorry for your loss 😦
~David
Thank you for your kind words, David.
In my world, grief can coexist with a neverending wonder at the natural world. It is this world that has saved me, again and again. 💗
So true, Bela. Mother Nature is constantly offering comfort to me.
As I know and trust She will. Blessings, dear one.
Thank you! 🤗