36 thoughts on “#SyllabicPoetry: 24 Seasons…”

1. Both poems provide lovely images with just a few words. Thanks, Balroop.

   1. Thanks Darlene.

2. Dear Balroop, both your poems are strong and beautiful.

   filled with light and darkness. I am glad to hear the strength in them

   Bless

   miriam

   1. Thank you for your lovely words, Miriam. ❤️

3. Fabulous butterfly cinquain, Balroop! Happy summer solstice, my friend. 💖

   1. Thank you Colleen. Wishing you a cool summer. 🤗

4. An engaging treat for the senses

   1. Thank you Annette.

5. Wonderful, both scenarios. I’m partial to the word blithe ❤

   1. Thanks Lisa. Summer brings many delights.

      1. You’re welcome, Balroop.

6. children can never resist this mango delight…I doubt us adults can too😬

   “alone, like me, yet blithe..”

   beautifully poignant, Balroop G 🤍🙏

   1. Thank you for stopping by to read and share your thoughts, much appreciated.

7. These are both lovely, Balroop. The second one is poignant.

   1. Thank you Robbie. 🤗

8. Lovely Balroop… ♥

   1. Thank you Sally 🤗

9. Aww mangoes. I jotted something down about mangoes too. How very cool. And butterfly cinquain too. Again cool. Will post tomorrow.
   I love yours, Balroop. Happy summer and summer solstice/full moon. Yay. Eat a mango for me. 🥹

   1. Mangoes remain our favorite forever! Thank you for sharing your love for them. 🥰 Happy Summer dear Selma.

      1. And to you. Happy moon gazing too. Hope it’s a cloudless night

      2. Thank you Selma. 🤗

      3. My pleasure. 😇

10. Very beautiful🌼

    1. Thank you Jude.

11. These are both beautiful. I especially enjoyed the second one. This: “the resplendent strawberry moon
    alone, like me, yet blithe,
    showering love”

    ❤ ❤ ❤

    1. Thank you Lisa.

12. Hi Balroop, that was so lovely. I’m sorry I haven’t been around (been babysitting my grandbaby), but I’ve thought of you and send hugs.

    1. Thank you Luanne. I can understand how grand babies take all our time and offer immense joy. Enjoy the moments as they fleet away too fast.

       1. Yes, I am definitely doing that. xo

13. Both the poems are fantastic and who would not love to eat nice and juicy mangoes. Thanks Balroop 🤗

    1. Thank you for sharing your thoughts Kamal, much appreciated, my friend. 🤗

       1. Always welcome dear Balroop 🤗🤗🤗

14. Lovely, Balroop. Tenderness and sadness, light and dark, all beautifully captured in verse. ❤️

    1. Thank you Gwen.

15. Both so beautiful, Balroop. You capture the essence of summer with ease. Hugs.

    1. Thank you Diana.

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