#TankaTuesday #SyllabicPoetry

Morning chill clutches me
despite the sun’s golden glow
purple hues don’t melt.
seasons change, young leaves flutter
I still wait at the window

***

bleeding bit by bit
a cracked heart treasures moments
of joyous summer
that would never come again
smoky clouds echo my thoughts.

*** 

fragrant breeze billows
fallen petals prophesize
smothering summer.
a thousand poems won’t soothe
incisive ache of my heart.
© Balroop Singh

Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry. 

The kigo words: clouds, young leaves, fragrant breeze.

Thank you dear readers. If you like poetry, read more: Moments We Love 

45 thoughts on “#TankaTuesday #SyllabicPoetry

  1. The image is beautiful. Is that outside your window? All of these poems are touching. This: “a thousand poems won’t sootheincisive ache of my heart.”

    Succinctly captures your pain, Balroop. Sending hugs to you. ❤

  2. Beautiful and tender, Balroop. Your tears flow with the rhythm of the poems. 💙

  3. That’s such a beautiful image, Balroop ji. Is that your garden? And the poetry is poignant. May it get easier by each passing day and may the pain melt away. Hugs.

    1. That image was taken a few years ago by me but it defines my days so well… thank you for your kind words of support, Smitha.

  4. Even the picture looks sad with the blossoms blown away from their plant, scattered on the ground, never to melt. Your poem expresses, not only sadness, but incremental healing that will eventually replace sorrow with the joy of memories. The bad moments fade leaving only the shining stars of good times. I pray that happens sooner than later and that you experience the peace of God that passes all understanding.

    1. I love your interpretation of the picture, Marsha. It is a mute representation of my emotions and sentiments. Thank you so much for understanding. I appreciate your kind thoughts and wishes.

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