Dark #Winter

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Dark, windy winter
hisses like venomous viper
cold light casts shadows 

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cold clouds dominate
pine needles flutter fiercely 
birds snuggle and hide

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snowdrops hang on trees
fog envelops the valley
darkness draws nearer

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sun has been eclipsed
Mother Nature shares sadness
mist hovers mutely
© Balroop Singh

Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry.

Kigo words that I chose for this challenge: cold light, cold clouds, snowdrops.

57 thoughts on “Dark #Winter

  1. Balroop, powerful poems that capture the oppressive and suffocating darkness of winter. I love the simile of the winter wind as it ‘hisses like venomous viper’. Very striking!

  2. Balroop, your masterly description of winter and darkness within is so strong. Last one carrying
    Hope in its softness. So powerful. 🕯.
    Miriam

  3. Balroop, your haiku sequence masterfully captures the harsh beauty of winter, weaving together vivid imagery and poignant emotions. The chosen kigo words add depth to each verse, creating a symphony of nature’s elements. Wonderful work! ❄️🌲

    ~David

  4. cold light casts shadows/birds snuggle and hide/darkness draws nearer: I love this trio. Thanks, Balroop. Hope you realize there’s so much comfort in your words. Be well, dear Balroop. You are the light you reflect. blessings.

  5. Your poems touch the heart, Balroop. The sadness is palpable, but so is hope. ❤️

  6. I love the line, “cold light casts shadows ”

    I was watching a masterclass episode by Billy Collins and he comically said, “poets get paid to pay attention to the weather and little animals. Someone needs to keep an eye on these things, you know?” It made me laugh. Your poem reminds me of that.

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