58 thoughts on “#TankaTuesday #Poetry”

1. Your poem is wholly wonderful, Balroop. So filled of joy and beauty.
   And togetherness.
   “ no greater felicity
   than joyous togetherness “.
   I love it.

   Miriam

   1. Thank you Miriam for your heartwarming comment. 🤗

2. Me, too. I love your word choices.

   1. Thank you Melissa.

3. ah, the pleasures of blissful life!

   1. That’s what the image conveys! 🥰

4. This is a happy poem. You made me smile, Balroop!

   1. Thanks Vera, I am happy to hear that.

5. Beautiful, so perfect for the image!

   1. Thank you Terri. It is an awesome image, emitting so much of love and adventure. So evocative!

      1. Thank you, Balroop!

6. You captured that picture, Balroop. So much warmth there.

   1. Thank you Jacqui. 🤗

7. What a beautiful interpretation of the photo, Balroop. You made me feel it.

   1. Thank you Jan, I am delighted to hear that.

8. We all need the moments. Well said, Balroop! Xo

   1. Thank you Denise.

9. Spectacular, Balroop. You capture the feel of the image in both tanka. You’re really wonderful at writing these. 🙂

   1. Thank you so much Diana. You are so kind with the choice of your words. 🤗

10. Stunning double tanka, Balroop. You conveyed the feeling from this photo so well. Thanks so much. Beautiful words. 🧡

    1. Thank you so much Colleen, I appreciate your kind words. 🤗

       1. Thanks, Balroop. You seem to be excelling at these syllabic forms. I love it. 💜

       2. Thanks to your inspiration Colleen, you kick my muse out of her comfort zone to explore new paths. 🤗

11. Beautiful and perfect verses to pair with the photo, Balroop. 💚

    1. Thank you Lauren.

12. Just stunning, Balroop. They are both exquisite, but I’m especially drawn to the first one. I love “melt in the hourglass of time” and “tasseled gift of gold.”

    1. Thank you Mae, those phrases are my favorite too. 🤗

       1. 💕

13. Girls breezy banter – how sweet. I love your poem, Balroop. 🤗

    1. Thank you Gwen 🥰

14. Very lighthearted, to match beautifully with the photo, Balroop. Well done!

    1. Thank you so much Lisa, love your support dear friend. 🥰

15. Your description paints a mesmerizing picture of friends enjoying each other’s company in the soothing embrace of nature. The evening’s grandeur, the laughter of the girls, and the fragrant air create a perfect atmosphere for joy and togetherness. It’s moments like these that truly enrich our lives with warmth and lasting memories.
    Beautiful, Balroop! 🙂

    1. Thank you Pat for your lovely comment, I appreciate your kindness. You are so right, such moments become cherished memories. 🤗

16. These are delightful poems, Balroop. Nice depictions of joyful moments.

    1. Thank you Robbie.

17. These poems are beautiful reminder of being blessed and surrounded by lovely friends .loved it 💕

    1. Thank you Daljeet, nice to hear from you. 🤗

18. I treasure friendship so much these days. “No greater felicity
    than joyous togetherness” speaks to me today, Balroop. Both poems are beautiful.

    1. Thank you for sharing your thoughts Miriam. 🤗

       1. You’re welcome, Balroop. ☺️

19. Wonderful and beautiful poem apt with the picture, Balroop. Congratulations on your new book. Lovely post 👍🏽🙏🏻👍🏽👌😊

    1. Thank you Kamal.

       1. Welcome Balroop ❤️

20. Very nicely done.

    1. Thank you Roth.

       1. You are welome!

21. Balroop, you capture the essence of the image in your poems.

    1. Thank you Lisa.

       1. You’re welcome.

22. Wonderful response(s) to the prompt. I especially like the second one for this:
    girls’ breezy banter
    no greater felicity
    than joyous togetherness
    I can just hear them out there on the water!

    1. Thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts Luanne, much appreciated.

       1. You’re welcome!

23. Love your Tanka Tuesday verse. It made me smile;)
    Take special care, my friend.

    1. Thank you so much Sandra. I am happy to hear about that smile. 😊

24. So very beautiful balroop💕

    1. Thank you! 🥰

       1. Pleasure💕

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