A lovely love cove
A covert awning for us
It’s charm enhanced by
blossoms that hang overhead
pairs of ducks swim merrily.
***
Our favorite haunt
that added breeze to our love
I wait for you here
to soak in serenity
our yearning grew with seasons.
***
Moments drenched with mirth
That could never lose luster
our dainty orchids
kiss our passion with dew of
eternal togetherness
***
© Balroop Singh
Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration to create syllabic poetry.
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Beautiful.
Thank you Cindy.
I’m swept up in the vision and enchantment of this, Balroop. Lovely!
I love your choice of words to express your thoughts. Thank you Mae for stopping by to share them.
I could have closed my eyes while having this read to me and imagine the photo perfectly!
Thank you so much Annette for understanding poetry so well! 😊 Love your thoughts.
Just beautiful, Balroop. The line, “eternal togetherness” is so powerful and expressive!
Thank you Jan. Don’t we all crave for that? 🤗
So beautiful, Balroop. I love the line “added breeze to our love!”
Thank you Denise.
There are a few lines in this poem that really grabbed me. “Moments drenched in mirth”–that is wonderful.
Thanks Jacqui, you always catch the best line. That’s my favorite too.
So beautiful, Balroop, and I love how they tie into one another!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you Yvette, I try to write at least two. 😊
Beautiful love tanka(s), Balroop. Oh, I’d love to be there right now, just soaking it in. ❤ ❤
VEry lovely verses, Balroop.
Thank you Robbie.
I was with you there, lovely 💞
Thank you AJ.
Awesome and serene to the beauty all around. Too good Balroop ❤️
Thank you Kamal 💜
Welcome dear Balroop ❤️
These are all beautiful, Balroop. I especially love the third one. Hugs. ❤
Thank you Lisa, the third one speaks in metaphors, you were bound to like it. 🤗
These are really beautiful, Balroop. A tanka is such a perfect entity, all to itself, isn’t it?!
I love this form, Luanne. Thanks for stopping by to share your thoughts.
You are welcome!
So beautiful 💜
Thank you Willow.💛
A pleasure 💜
Full of love…all 3
Yes indeed 💜
Balroop this sounds like an enchanted place where two lovers, even though worlds apart, continue to meet in their memories. I love this!
Thank you Lisa, I am delighted to hear your thoughts.
You’re welcome.
What a beautiful thread of coherence weaved through all 3 and so perfect each one too.
Thank you for your lovely words of encouragement Prag, much appreciated.
I love the way your tanka flow, Balroop. All three share beautiful moments captured in time. Truly stunning.
Thank you Colleen, I am glad you liked them. Your encouragement always infuses new inspiration. 🤗
You have blossomed through your poetry, Balroop. ❤️
Thank you so much dear 🥰
It’s always a pleasure to read your poetry, Balroop.
Now that looks like a favourite haunt…. Beautiful thoughts via your poems Balroop.. Sending Blessings and Enjoy your weekend ❤
Thank you Sue, I am delighted to hear your thoughts about my poems. Love and hugs.
Always a pleasure Balroop… ❤
I see so much of hubby and my married life in these words, Balroop. His humor and kindness, nature’s beauty we surround ourselves with, kisses to keep our blood flowing, lol
Beautiful!!
Thanks!
Lovely.
We must be of a similar generation. Married over 40 + years, just two grands though 😀
Thanks for visiting my post.
Sorry to be late getting back. It’s been a bit busy over here these days…
Thanks for coming over to Emotional Shadows, Jules. Yes, you are right about similar generation.
With age… wisdom? 😀