Blissful Love
When
roses
coruscate,
the passion of
petals emit a
resplendent spark that shows
how ecstatic are whispers
of green love that blooms unawares,
a fairy tale that sounds authentic,
a journey to luminous lands of choice.
…
The fragrance fleets just like the petals drop
but austere love embraces each moment
it glistens and thrives in the hearts
complemented by new dreams
percolates into souls
just like vintage wine
swirls on our tongue
a sublime
touch of
bliss.
© Balroop Singh, 2023
This week’s challenge is photo prompt. Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration to write some syllabic poetry. I chose Etheree, which consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.
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A delightful poem dear balroop, so cleverly prosed to resonate with heart and soul❤️ long May the rose live as loves infinite joy🥰 much love to you x
Thank you for coming over to read and share your thoughts Barbara, much appreciated. Have a wonderful week.
That’s stunning, Balroop. I love the form you used, and as always you are a true artist with images and words!
Thank you Mae, I love this form, as it gives an opportunity to say a lot but keeps it compact. 😊
Sublime, Balroop! 💕🙂
Thank you Harmony 🥰
That was beautiful, Balroop. What lovely flow and delicious words. I couldn’t look away. ❤ ❤
Thank you Diana, picture prompts ignite my thoughts and words within minutes. 😀🤗
That doesn’t surprise me. I think poets are probably very visual to come up with all that beautiful imagery.
Thank you so much Diana. 🥰
You captured bliss so well, Balroop!
Thank you Denise 🤗
Beautiful response to a beautiful image, Balroop. Very aptly expressed in a double etheree!
Thank you Lisa, the beauty of roses evoke a thousand thoughts though this one looks jaded.😀
🙂 It does have an eerie quality.
😀💛
Your double Etheree captures the exquisite beauty of a rose. It’s so lovely it’s almost magical. Well done, Balroop. This is wonderful! 🌹
Thank you Colleen, the velvety look of the rose inspired the backward etheree. 🥰
Well done!
Wow this style of poetry is amazing, and beautiful on the page as well as in the words. Bravo bravo
Thank you!
Welcome
Lovely. 🌹💓
Thank you Bela 🤗
Gorgeous, Balroop!
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Thank you Yvette 🤗
Exquisite, Balroop. So fitting for a rose.
Thank you Jan
What beautiful imagery these words evoke, Balroop. “percolates into souls” Such a great word.
Thank you Jacqui, love your feedback.
Hi Balroop, beautiful and vivid imagery.
Thank you Robbie 🤗
Such beauty and bliss in your words, Balroop! Lovely!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts Lauren 🤗
You’re very welcome, Balroop!
Balroop, wonderful poem. It’s such a difficult form. And that word “coruscate,” which I don’t remember reading before is just perfect.
Thank you Luanne, welcome to Emotional Shadows. It’s a pleasure to connect with you.
Thank you! Same here!
Wonderful poem Balroop. The rose is looking so beautiful. Lovely post.
Thank you Kamal. 🥰
You are always welcome Balroop ❤️
beautiful words and love the connections you made Balroop! 🌹
Thank you Cindy 🤗
You’re so welcome Balroop! 🌹
Terri’s photo is stunning, and your poem does it justice. Lovely, Balroop!
Thank you Jacquie. 🤗
Stunning lines, Balroop ❤
Sincerely,
David
Thank you David. 😊
Wow stunning 💜
Thanks Willow. 🌺
A pleasure Balroop 💜
Oh, what a magnificent poem Balroop. 👏 is so 🔥
Thank you Marje ❤️
My pleasure Balroop. ❤️
Sublime, Balroop! This is a beautiful lilting ‘song’ of the poem that lifts my soul. ❤️🌹
Thank you Annika for such a lovely thought. 🥰
Dawh this is beautiful 😍 🤩 👌 ❤️ thank you for sharing! I hope there’s going to be more!