Today’s challenge explores Ekphrastic poetry, inspired by visual art or photographs. Reena provided a piece of her artwork for this month’s challenge. Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry.
I chose a new form: Octelle and have tried to write two poems. It was challenging as I had to keep in mind the rhyming scheme, while writing a syllabic form.
The Octelle is a poem consisting of eight lines, using personification and symbolism in a telling manner. The syllable count structure for this verse is 8/8/7/7/7/7/8/8, and the rhyme scheme is aa/bb/cc/aa.) The first two lines and the last two lines are identical (refrain).
Aesthetic Coup
echoes of green, crimson and blue
pull me into aesthetic coup
of colors that define life
vague reflections croon with fife
yearn for elusive tunes
trapped in the maze of half moons
echoes of green, crimson and blue
pull me into aesthetic coup
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Invisible
aching desires rest in designs
every single moment she whines
clipped wings are invisible
dried blood is divisible
you put it in cubbyholes
to sell the sagacious souls
aching desires rest in designs
every single moment she whines
© Balroop Singh
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Both beautiful poems, Balroop! 💕🙂
Thank you Harmony. 🤗
What a challenging form, Balroop. You’re braver than I, and you pulled it off! Great job with the challenge. 🙂
Thank you Diana, I am glad you consider me brave, I‘be always shied away from writing within the rules but am surprised at my efforts to create syllable forms. 😊
I definitely shy away from anything demanding a rhyme. My brain doesn’t work that way, so I’m always impressed when someone pulls if off so well.
I agree with you Diana, many times the original thought gets lost in the effort of rhyming. Rules sound oppressive! 😊
Remarkable effort with seemingly effortless results! Well done, you.
Thank you Annette, it was not effortless though😀
Lovely poems, Balroop!
Thank you Jill
Trapped in the maze of half moons …
is the predominant thought I’ve on seeing the picture.
Your second poem beats the first one. 👏👏🔥🔥❤️
Thanks Reena, this was an evocative prompt! 🥰
Glad you liked it. Thanks, Balroop!
WOW!!! Balroop both to your poems and the wonderful Art of Reena,
Sending Hugs and love your way ❤
Thank you Sue. Yes, that is an inspiring art. 🤗
It’s always brave to take on a new challenge and you did a fabulous job with both poems, Balroop!
Thank you Jan for your encouraging words, much appreciated.
It’s wonderful that you try new forms of poetry, Balroop, inspiring for other poets. And these are absolutely beautiful, along with Reena’s artwork. 💞
All credit goes to Colleen, our Angel of syllabic poetry. Thank you Lauren for sharing your lovely thoughts.
I like that repeat format. Beautiful poems.
Beautifully written, especially in such a challenging format, Balroop.
Thank you Denise.
Balroop, your second poem resonates with me so much. I love this: “Trapped in the maze of half moons…” it speaks of the sometimes repetition in life. Well done, my friend. The rules give us structure and a framework to blossom creatively. Look at all this syllabic poetry you’ve embrace. You’re impressive! 💜
Thank you so much Colleen. I’ve tried to use a lot of images to speak about life and people. I am delighted that you picked up the most relevant one. All credit goes to you dear friend. I always look forward to Ekphrastic challenge as pictures really speak to me.😊 🤗
I love getting inspiration from images as well. They really help me form an idea in my mind. I just love how much fun you have. ❤️
Love the rhythm of this style- beautiful, Balroop ❤
Thank you Jacquie, I am delighted to hear that.
Well done, Balroop! Sharing… ❤ xo
Thank you Bette for reading and sharing. 🤗
Hugs!
Hi Balroop, once again both poems are lovely, but that second poem really resonates with me.
Thanks Robbie 🤗
Wow! Some gorgeous prose here Balroop. Just beautiful! 🙂 x
Thanks Deb.
Beautiful, Balroop. Each of them is quite amazing. 😊
Thank you so much Gwen. 🥰
Hi Balroop! Thank you for introducing the Octelle poetry form to us. I love it! Both poems are fabulous. The second is my favorite.🥰
My pleasure Vashti, all credit goes to Colleen for the inspiration to try new syllabic forms of poetry. I am glad you liked it.
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this is gorgeous writing, Balroop ~ thank you!
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David
Thank you for a lovely compliment David.
Wow! I loved both poems. So different and beautiful. I think I’ll try the octelle next time. Thank you for sharing it.
Thank you Smitha. 🥰
Oh my. How absolutely lovely. I’ve worked with that form only once and liked it. Your examples are great models to ‘try’ to imitate. You do this so well. And I’m the lucky one for reading. Thanks dearly.
Thank you so much for sharing your lovely thoughts about my poetry Selma, much appreciated. 🥰