74 thoughts on “Transitions #Poetry Challenge”

1. this is great, keep writing 👍

   1. Thank you Jim, welcome to Emotional Shadows, where all the emotions are cared for.

      1. Wow, I’ll hang out when I can 😊😊

2. This is exactly what I needed this morning, Balroop. Simply lovely. xo

   1. Thank you Jill, I am delighted to hear that.

3. Beautiful. I like the positive vibes of the starting lines-
   “colors
   rock our cradle
   we are bubbles of joy
   life sounds sublime initially
   carefree”

   1. Thank you Arv. Life gives us so much, what we embrace is our choice. I prefer positivity and joy.

      1. truly

4. What a wonderful message, Balroop. From beginning to end, this was wonderful! Thank you for sharing such lovely words!

   1. I am glad the message of choosing is reaching out through my words Mae. Choices make us what we become. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. 😊

5. Beautiful. I absolutely love those last two lines! A much needed message for sure. Well done, Balroop 💕🙂

   1. Thank you Harmony, the journey of life ends beautifully if souls merge, that’s how they stay together forever. 😊

      1. 💖

6. Beautiful poetry, Balroop. I love the way this form can tell a story. I loved that the journey of life ended on such a sublimely beautiful note. ❤

   1. The beauty of life is difficult to capture in words Diana. This form sounded as challenging as the hues of life but the resolve to try various forms kept me going. I am glad you like it. Thank you! 🤗

7. Fantastic poem on colours, Balroop. They tell a story of their own.

   1. Thanks Kamal, colors add charm and joy to our life and make it worth living. 😊

      1. Yes so true. Always welcome Balroop ❤️😊❤️

8. HI Balroop, this is a beautiful poem. A great attempt at a new form for you.

   1. Thanks Robbie, trying new forms of poetry is my promise to self this year. I appreciate your encouragement.

9. Beautiful, Balroop 🙂 I loved the colors weaved in the message. Perfect final lines.

   1. Thank you Denise. 😊 Colors are the sunshine of life.

      1. They are 🙂

10. This is so beautiful! I absolutely love it. And what an accomplishment, Balroop. That sounds like a complicated poem style!

    1. Thank you Lisa, love your feedback. Syllable poetry writing is very challenging but it is satisfying when you can steer through it. I am glad you like it.

11. Awesome writing Balroop! Really enjoyed it ❤ ❤

    1. Thank you for coming over to read my poetry, I am delighted to see you here.

12. Your poem is a very beautiful progression of transitions, and I love how you brought a cheerful and positive outlook to this inevitability of life. You literally and figuratively added and reminded of beautiful colors of life that we live with.

    1. Colors have a special relationship with emotions Prag, that’s why I have tried to bring them in. If you look at the first and last word of each stanza, they link both of them. 😊 Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

       1. “If you look at the first and last word of each stanza,” – thank you for pointing this out. I read your poem again and appreciated it newly. Truly beautiful how you integrated different layers and aspects together.

       2. Thank you Prag, love your words. 🥰🤗

13. What a great use of imagery and a soul touching piece. Your creativity is simply amazing, Balroop dear.

    1. Thank you! I am delighted to hear that. 😊

       1. Most welcome 😊

14. Very lovely Balroop
    “life keeps on smiling” Yes always, it’s what is making a difference.

    1. Thank you Miriam for your lovely words.

15. Colors really evoke so much emotion. Nicely done.

    1. Thanks Jacqui. Colors and emotions are inter-related. 😊

16. That crown cinquain works well with the crescendo of colors that end softly with such a vital but if… “if we let the woeful clouds pass”. Well done!

    1. Thank you D. I am delighted to hear that you like it. 😊

17. Look at you go, Balroop! Your crown cinquain with the theme of transitions is wonderfully presented. The last stanza really comes out and grabs me. I love the message of continuing to look on the bright side of life. Well done, my dear friend. ❤

    1. All thanks to you Colleen for the inspiration. Each time I try a new form, I am filled with gratitude for your challenges. Love and hugs 🥰

       1. I’m just thrilled you’re having fun. Hugs Balroop. ❤️

       2. 🤗🤗

18. A lovely poem, Balroop. You did a great job with the prompt. I love that it ends on a positive note.

    1. Thank you Jan, positivity is my old pal. I am glad you liked it.

19. Ah, the stages life… wonderfully told, Balroop! 💞

    1. Thank you so much Bette for your lovely words. 🤗

       1. And for yours, Balroop… 💞

20. Beautiful words, Balroop. You are so good at taking on new poetry challenges with lovely outcomes. 🌺

    1. Thank you Lauren, new forms of poetry are challenging but I like to kick my muse. 😊

21. Loving it.. A marvel in itself.. 👍🏼😊👌🏼👌🏼👏🏼👏🏼..

    1. Thank you for such a beautiful compliment.🥰

       1. You deserve it dear.. For all your works, always.. 👍🏼😊

22. Your poem is one of my favorites this week, Balroop! I love the transition of life through your poem. 🙂

    1. Thank you Yvette, I am glad to hear that. 🥰🤗

23. I love this, Balroop! You packed so much into it 😀 so beautifully!

    -David

    1. Thank you so much for standing by to share your thoughts 😊

24. Our life is full of transitions. Your poem is absolutely lovely to illustrate the beauty of life. So glad you tried the new poetry form, Balroop! 🙂

    1. Thank you Miriam, I am glad you like the illustrations of life, colors add beauty to it. 😊

       1. Yes, Balroop, the rainbow is a best description of life. 🌈😊

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26. Wonderful illustration of the transitions we face in life Balroop..♥

    1. Thank you Sally for coming over to read and share your thoughts. 🤗

27. The colors cascade and merge with each other throughout the tone and vibe of each stanza! Love it ❤

    1. Thanks for such lovely words Jaya, I am feeling honored. 😊🥰

28. A beautiful and uplifting start to my day, Balroop and just what I needed to read at the moment! I love how your words seem to bubble just as you describe, light with joy and hope! May ‘life keeps on smiling’ for us all. ❤️

    1. I am delighted to hear that Annika. That’s all we need – light, hope and joy. Thank you for such lovely words for my poetry. 😊

29. I feel the passage of time in your verses, Balroop- lovely ❤

    1. What a lovely observation! Thank you Jacquie 🤗

30. Beautifully written

    1. Thank you!

       1. You are most welcome 💖

31. Such a beautiful poem about colors. Keep writing, my friend

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