Riding on the smoky clouds
We enter the realms of rejuvenating mists
Fluttering around Angelic alacrity
To recreate this amorphous adventure
Who is this between us?
Accentuating the beauty of our venture
Adept at changing shapes
Adorning colors of similar semblance
Disseminating vibes of vibrant lure
Evincing our real rapport
Beams of light kissing our faces
Lending a glow of glorious brilliance
Shining in our own characters
Away from ear-shattering sounds
We soar away from strife and animosity
Earthly identities seem insignificant
Detachment seems so blissful
You may call it escapism
You are free to judge us
We are beyond your chaotic world!
© Balroop Singh
Written for Sue Vincent’s #photoprompt Wisp.
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Emotional Shadows 
We sure would be much better off there. I am ready to fly with you away from this materialistic world ☺️
Sure, I am making the itinerary…hone your wings…will mail you soon 🙂
Hahaha, sure ☺️
Beyond the chaotic world?
sounds tempting
Yes, it is! Fantasy is a fantastic realm 🙂
Detachment sounds delightful, sometimes, especially beyond the chaotic world. 🙂 Beautiful B.
Thank you Deb…May we find delight in words and dreams! 🙂
Amen to that. 🙂 x
Beautiful, Balroop. The clouds are certainly above the chaos. I like to think that they show us how to “soar away from strife and animosity” – if only in our hearts and imaginations.
Beauty and imagination make an awesome combination, endowing us with tranquil thoughts. 🙂
Delightfully tranquil, Balroop…and perfect for the location of the photo…
Thank you Sue, I am glad you found it suitable for the prompt. 🙂
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If I could do virtual reality, it would be to float around among the clouds for all the reasons you mention in your poem. The problem is, I might choose to stay there.
I would also like to do the same 🙂
Heavenly 🙂
We are leaving our bodies behind and allowing our souls to soar.
Thanks for adding a realistic touch to this fantastical flight. 🙂 Stay blessed!
So beautifully captured, stream of words so aptly arranged to depict the soul behind the floating cloud, these are not non living things on the sky but provides that liveliness to us, they are random and they can form any shape and go anywhere, the essence of formless. The purity in its manifestation, the clear background sky and the nice little white patches making their presence felt on us. Yes, when gaze at those clear sky and with those slowly floating patches of cloud we want go along with it and escape the cacophony on the ground. There is so much peace and there is uncanny profoundness around the lovely picture captured and so beautifully woven thoughts around it. Thanks Balroop for one more soul searching poem…
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Many thanks dear Nihar for your beautiful response to my reflections. Clouds cease to be non-living the moment you start drifting with them as they arouse a thousand thoughts, as varied as their shapes and colors…their presence lifts our spirit and tranquility transcends all around, making us oblivious of our surroundings. 🙂
Your thoughts carry some positive vibes as they always evoke more words and that’s why I always appreciate your presence here.
Always your poems have given a space for reflection and a source of inspiration, it is my pleasure to land here and get those thoughts loaded into my mind and I thoroughly enjoy doing it.
Balroop, have a beautiful weekend.
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“Detachment seems so blissful
You may call it escapism
You are free to judge us
We are beyond your chaotic world!”
Each line above is powerful, can float on its own – and you make it fly. Beautiful! 🙂
Thanks for your kind words, much appreciated!
Love the poem, Balroop… Nicely done!
Thanks Kev.